نمونه های خوب و پیشنهادی برای قسمت نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس

(مناسب برای زبان آموزان محترم و اساتید گرامی)

شماره 4 - نمونه مقالات مربوط به Task2 IELTS Writing The Academic/General Module

پس از گذراندن دوره آموزش مهارت نوشتاری، برای آشنا شدن با سبک های مختلف مقالات بخش نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس، زبان آموزان می بایست نمونه های خوب این مقالات را مطالعه نمایند تا علاوه بر دیدن این سبک ها، با تنوع ساختاری و تنوع کلمات و اصطلاحات مرتبط با مهارت نوشتاری نیز آشنا شوند.

مطالعه نمونه های خوب مقالات آیلتس به همه زبان آموزانی که برای این آزمون آماده می شوند توصیه می شود. نمونه مقاله این پست نمره کامل یعنی نمره 9 را در بخش دوم آزمون کسب کرده است. 

Model and sample answers for IELTS writing tasks

Collected & compiled by Hamid R. Bagheri

Source: http://www.commonmistakes.blogfa.com/

No. 4 – Task2 Academic/General

Having passed the writing skill training program, students should study good sample essays to fully get familiar not only with different writing styles, but also with a wide range of vocabulary and grammar structures used in sample essays. Studying these good sample answers is recommended to all ESL/EFL learners who are getting prepared to take the IELTS test.

Topic:

Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people believe that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Generally, music is considered to be one of the most popular and ancient modes of human expression. It features largely in all histories and all cultures and indeed has been one of the main ways of passing on cultural traditions to new generations. Because of this, many people view music as a positive influence for societies. They also believe that the influence on individuals is wholly beneficial as it is a long-established way of communicating and helping us to understand the whole range of human emotion and experience in a more spiritual language than words can represent.

However, there are different kinds of music and the qualities of classical music traditions are not necessarily part of the music many people experience today. In the modern world there is a huge music industry that sells piped music to supermarkets and advertisers. We are also constantly exposed to loud modern music from people’s CD players, iPods or car radios. So the view of music today as a kind of noise pollution produced by selfish people, is also a common and negative one. But it is difficult to think of a world without music.

Certainly there is bad music that may have negative influences, particularly on the young. But people’s taste in music tends to change as they get older, and it would be difficult to find someone who had no positive musical associations at all.

In conclusion, I think that music can have both positive and negative influences on people and society, but it is an integral part of human expression that we cannot really separate from our lives.

Total Words: 267

Band Score: 9.0

مقاله فوق نمره کامل Task یعنی نمره 9 را در آزمون کسب کرده است.

گردآوری: حمیدرضا باقری

منبع: http://commonmistakes.blogfa.com

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