نمونه های خوب و پیشنهادی برای قسمت نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس

(مناسب برای زبان آموزان محترم و اساتید گرامی)

شماره 5 - نمونه مقالات مربوط به Task2 IELTS Writing The Academic/General Module

پس از گذراندن دوره آموزش مهارت نوشتاری، برای آشنا شدن با سبک های مختلف مقالات بخش نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس، زبان آموزان می بایست نمونه های خوب این مقالات را مطالعه نمایند تا علاوه بر دیدن این سبک ها، با تنوع ساختاری و تنوع کلمات و اصطلاحات مرتبط با مهارت نوشتاری نیز آشنا شوند.

مطالعه نمونه های خوب مقالات آیلتس به همه زبان آموزانی که برای این آزمون آماده می شوند توصیه می شود. نمونه مقاله این پست نمره کامل یعنی نمره 9 را در بخش دوم آزمون کسب کرده است. 

Model and sample answers for IELTS writing tasks

Collected & compiled by Hamid R. Bagheri

Source: http://www.commonmistakes.blogfa.com/

No. 5 – Task2 Academic/General

Having passed the writing skill training program, students should study good sample essays to fully get familiar not only with different writing styles, but also with a wide range of vocabulary and grammar structures used in sample essays. Studying these good sample answers is recommended to all ESL/EFL learners who are getting prepared to take the IELTS test.

Topic:

In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country side. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole.

What are these problems?

How might they be reduced?

From the evidence of developing countries all over the world it seems inevitable that economic growth is generated in the business and industrial centers of the major cities. As a result, urban citizens have access to jobs and facilities that improve their living standards considerably. However, it is usually the case that these are not equally enjoyed by people in the countryside and this generates several problems for the countries concerned.

First of all, people from the countryside will try to move to the cities to get more employment opportunities and better access to facilities available there. But this increase in the urban population puts great pressure on housing and services, and leads to the creation of massive slum areas where conditions may be lower than in the rural villages. These are often left under-populated and this can impact on food production and can have severe affects for people in both urban and rural areas.

Finally, as a country’s economy develops, there may be an increasing sense of inequality as the towns get richer and the villages get poorer, and this may lead to more crime and even civil unrest.

The key to reducing these problems seems to lie in improving the standard of living and the facilities available in the countryside. Perhaps incentives can be offered to factories and companies to relocate; road and rail networks can be built to make such relocation possible; doctors and teachers could be required to spend part of their professional lives in rural areas, etc.

In conclusion, however, improving rural living standards requires investment and political will that is sometimes not easy to generate.

Total Words: 271

Band Score: 9.0

مقاله فوق نمره کامل Task یعنی نمره 9 را در آزمون کسب کرده است.

گردآوری: حمیدرضا باقری

منبع: http://commonmistakes.blogfa.com

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