No. 8 – Task1 Academic

نمونه های خوب و پیشنهادی برای قسمت نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس

(مناسب برای زبان آموزان محترم و اساتید گرامی)

شماره 8 - نمونه مقالات مربوط به Task1 IELTS Writing The Academic Module

پس از گذراندن دوره آموزش مهارت نوشتاری، برای آشنا شدن با سبک های مختلف مقالات بخش نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس، زبان آموزان می بایست نمونه های خوب این مقالات را مطالعه نمایند تا علاوه بر دیدن این سبک ها، با تنوع ساختاری و تنوع کلمات و اصطلاحات مرتبط با مهارت نوشتاری نیز آشنا شوند.

مطالعه نمونه های خوب مقالات آیلتس به همه زبان آموزانی که برای این آزمون آماده می شوند توصیه می شود. نمونه مقاله این پست نمره 7.5 را در بخش اول آزمون کسب کرده است. 

Model and sample answers for IELTS writing tasks

Collected & compiled by Hamid R. Bagheri

Source: http://www.commonmistakes.blogfa.com/

No. 8 – Task1 Academic

Having passed the writing skill training program, students should study good sample essays to fully get familiar not only with different writing styles, but also with a wide range of vocabulary and grammar structures used in sample essays. Studying these good sample answers is recommended to all ESL/EFL learners who are getting prepared to take the IELTS test.

Topic:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

In June 1996, an experimental flu vaccine was trialled in a large country town on females only.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The diagrams show data for a flu epidemic which hit a large country town in 1996. Figure 1 gives the number of persons who died; Figure 2 shows the percentage breakdown of females who received a new flu vaccine; and Figure 3 gives the number of cases of flu before and during the epidemic.

In Figure 1 it can be seen that the flu was responsible for the deaths of 2 females but no males in the period from March to May. However, from June to August, there were 4 female deaths and 1 male death.

According to the pie chart in Figure 2, only those females most at risk were given the new flu vaccine; 28% did not take part in the trial. Of those females who took part, 35% were aged (over 65 years old); 24% were babies or children; and 13% were either hospitalised or receiving other medical attention.

From Figure 3 it is clear that the new vaccine had a positive effect on the number of new cases of flu reported in females. There were just over 1000 cases reported in March, climbing rapidly to a peak of 3500 in June. Thereafter, the number of cases dropped slowly to about 2800 in August, before levelling off at 2500 for the rest of the year. For males, the figures were lower but showed a similar trend throughout the epidemic.

Total Words: 232

Band Score: 7.5

مقاله فوق نمره 7.5 را در آزمون کسب کرده است.

گردآوری: حمیدرضا باقری

منبع: http://commonmistakes.blogfa.com

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