No. 13 – Task1 Academic

نمونه های خوب و پیشنهادی برای قسمت نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس

(مناسب برای زبان آموزان محترم و اساتید گرامی)

شماره 13 - نمونه مقالات مربوط به Task1 IELTS Writing The Academic Module

پس از گذراندن دوره آموزش مهارت نوشتاری، برای آشنا شدن با سبک های مختلف مقالات بخش نوشتاری آزمون آیلتس، زبان آموزان می بایست نمونه های خوب این مقالات را مطالعه نمایند تا علاوه بر دیدن این سبک ها، با تنوع ساختاری و تنوع کلمات و اصطلاحات مرتبط با مهارت نوشتاری نیز آشنا شوند.

مطالعه نمونه های خوب مقالات آیلتس به همه زبان آموزانی که برای این آزمون آماده می شوند توصیه می شود. نمونه مقاله این پست نمره 7.5 را در بخش اول آزمون کسب کرده است.

Model and sample answers for IELTS writing tasks

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No. 13 – Task1 Academic

Having passed the writing skill training program, students should study good sample essays to fully get familiar not only with different writing styles, but also with a wide range of vocabulary and grammar structures used in sample essays. Studying these good sample answers is recommended to all ESL/EFL learners who are getting prepared to take the IELTS test.

Topic:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph above show information of employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
Summarize the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows changes in employment rates in six countries between 1995 and 2005, for men and women. Overall more and more people of working age are employed, and there have been significant improvements for women, although they leg behind men in entering the workforce.

The most obvious trend in the graph is that women have lower employment rates in most of the countries in the graph. For example, in Australia in 1995, 57 percent of men could find work or retain a job, but only 27 percent of women. The difference was even bigger in New Zealand, with 60 percent of women. Even in Switzerland and Iceland, slightly more men than women were in the job market.

The second biggest trend in the graph is the improvement in employment between 1995 and 2005. In all countries shown, figures for both men and women improved. The biggest change was in the United Kingdom, from 55 percent of men in 1995 to 73 percent over the ten years period.

Furthermore, the increases in employment rates for women were much higher in New Zealand. The percentage of working women jumped from 25 percent to 42 percent, and in the United States from 45 percent to 61 percent over the decade.

In conclusion, all the countries in the graph showed at least a 12 percent increase in employment rates of both men and women over the ten years. While men had relatively higher employment rate throughout the period, more and more women appear to be entering the labour market.

Total Words: 256

Band Score: 7.5

مقاله فوق نمره 7.5 را در آزمون کسب کرده است.

گردآوری: حمیدرضا باقری

منبع: http://commonmistakes.blogfa.com

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